“Tacoma Grunge” by Chuck Rybak

Screen shot from “Tacoma Grunge” by Chuck Rybak. White background with text in black and a couple of words in red. The text is all written like a poem: in verses. Text: “Title: Tacoma Grunge/ EMO boy educates the Tacoma clubs./ Others drink./ Girlfriend scolds the Tacoma drunks./ sing the jam shrooms throaty--/ Writers unsettle the cover designer./ Patron fondles the moshers./ promote the cheap beer--/ Basements advertise the flannel cats./ Arts exterminate./ Flannels scold the yous./ shred the finger style amazement--/ Backup drummer arrests the clowns”  At the left side upward corner the names Nick Montfort and Scott Rettberg are marked over with a line and replaced in red by the names “Tacoma Grunge” and “Chuck Rybak”
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This generative poem is published as a blog posting and framed by the story of a young Scott Rettberg in graduate school, learning HTML and writing electronic literature at a time before his department had a website. Twenty years later, Rybak’s first attempt at writing e-literature is built upon Rettberg’s “Tokyo Garage” by changing the data set to evoke a cultural scene from the early 1990s.

This here is a re-remix (in a long line of remixes) of the generated nature poem Tokoro Gorge by Nick Montfort, as well as the urban, modern, and playful Tokyo Garage by Scott Rettberg. Nick Montfort wrote the code, which was remixed at the word level by Scott Rettberg, and I hacked Rettberg’s words to make the poem about something else, basically so I could learn something about electronic literature while experiencing it. Remixed May 15, 2012 by Chuck Rybak.

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